Age/Gender: 15, Male
Location: HH, NJ
Job: A.I.
Hey, I'm CJ or Robojester, I like drawing cartoons with my friends and joking around. Video games are a must in my world. I enjoy talking, long walks on the beach, and flooding the Enrichment Center with a deadly neurotoxin.
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Flash Reviews: 43
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43 Reviews | 12 w/ Responses
Listen, your flash needs A LOT of work. It's fine and up to par for a beginner but PLEASE try to increase your skills.
The sound was very very bad.
The story was badly written and it seemed like you were grasping for jokes.
You really need to work on your animation skills because without that you'll keep making eyesores like these.
All in all I'm giving you a one for effort (even though it only took you 2 days) you seem like you really want to get into flash so keep practicing and I'll be looking forward to seeing your next projects after you progress.
Author's Response:
yeah sure
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Well done with this flash, I've always enjoyed well animated stick fights and this is no exception. 5/5!
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I thought this text - based game was definitely good. Although I am a bit stumped after taking the ritalin, securing the blindfold, and donning the gloves, I did have a lot of fun with this game. Make sommo'.
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That was great! Looking forward to more!
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Work on your script writing a bit, get some better sound effects, your animation could use a little work but its great all the same. The scenes just werent that funny, and when I thought you said Robot Chicken style you meant clay :3
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It was good for a beginner I mean If i tried It would be blammed the second it got one here butttttttt.
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Ok, animation was a little sloppy but I understand this IS your first so just work on that better character details, movement, syncing etc.
I couldn't see most of the letters when the subtitles were on so fix that as well. But all in all it was a very good attempt keep it up.
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This is a great game there's barely anything I can say about it its just that when I made #1 on the high scores I then aded 10,000 more points by playing the unlock game but it didnt add on and now I lost it lol.
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The score only counts the main story pics.
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The flash was phenominal. It was just outstanding the bad thing though is that it goes too fast. I dont know if that was your point to make it more difficult or if it was just a mistake. Anyway great job I can't wait to see more.
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Ok, the animation was ok just work on that a bit more also work on special effects and sound. Other than that this was a really good flash
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It is a well done movie for something that you did within a two hour period. But the fact of the language and some of the crappy animation made it kind of suck. It was pretty funny dont get me wrong, but it was also kind of stupid, what realy got me though was when all this was happening and the calm piano music was playing in the background. Try harder and I'm sure your next one will rock.
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